Kia ora Brian. Your story is great and tells me that you really enjoy being with your family. You have written a great account of this day of your holiday, so thank you for sharing. Next time, remember to break your stories into sentences as it is hard to read a whole story that is just one sentence. I would like to give you a tip too - if you ctl c (copy) your story from your Google doc, and then open your blog and click 'new post', you just need to hold down 'ctl and shift 'together and 'v', then your story will paste straight into your blog and can be read without me having to scroll down. Give it a try next time and see if you like the way your story looks. Keep up the bog posting!
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Kia ora Brian. Your story is great and tells me that you really enjoy being with your family. You have written a great account of this day of your holiday, so thank you for sharing. Next time, remember to break your stories into sentences as it is hard to read a whole story that is just one sentence. I would like to give you a tip too - if you ctl c (copy) your story from your Google doc, and then open your blog and click 'new post', you just need to hold down 'ctl and shift 'together and 'v', then your story will paste straight into your blog and can be read without me having to scroll down. Give it a try next time and see if you like the way your story looks. Keep up the bog posting!
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